Wednesday, September 10, 2014

CAUGHT YA'S 1-10

Format for the Caught Ya


Name            Date (Spelled Out)         Caught Ya #



































Caught Ya #1
(Incorrect)
isabelle ingenuous always animated twirled in nervousness and a excess of energy.  pauline puerile whined in a babyish manner about the tardiness of olivia otiose about having to return to horribly hard middle school for another year and about the homework the teachers loved to pile on her





Caught Ya #1
(Correct)
     Isabelle Ingenuous, always animated, twirled in nervousness and a excess of energy.  Pauline Puerile whined in a babyish manner about the tardiness of Olivia Otiose, about having to return to Horribly Hard Middle School for another year, and about the homework the teachers loved to pile on her.





Vocabulary
(Add each word to your vocabulary section in your binder and define each one.)

ingenuous    
animated     
excess       
puerile
tardiness           
otiose   









Format for the Caught Ya


Name            Date (Spelled Out)         Caught Ya #



































Caught Ya #2
(Incorrect)
another girl was garbed all in black.  even her hair was dyed black.  it was felicia fey who acted in a bizarre manner and who was known for her spells that always went awry








Caught Ya #2
(Correct)
     Another girl was garbed all in black.  Even her hair was dyed black.  It was Felicia Fey, who acted in a bizarre manner and who was known for her spells that always went awry.









Vocabulary
(Add each word to your vocabulary section in your binder and define each one.)

garbed     
fey            
awry
      




























Format for the Caught Ya


Name            Date (Spelled Out)         Caught Ya #


































Caught Ya #3
(Incorrect)
felicia began to mutter words of a spell to encourage her friend olivia otiose to hurry.  isabelle ingenuous put her hand over felicias mouth to stop her from uttering her spell and she warned her freind








Caught Ya #3
(Correct)
Felicia began to mutter words of a spell to encourage her friend Olivia Otiose to hurry. Isabelle Ingenuous put her hand over Felicia's mouth to stop her from uttering her spell, and she warned her friend.








Vocabulary
(Add each word to your vocabulary section in your binder and define each one.)

otiose            
ingenuous         
uttering
      

























Format for the Caught Ya


Name            Date (Spelled Out)         Caught Ya #


































Caught Ya #4
(Incorrect)
you know it will backfire on you felicia warned isabelle ingenuous.  you dont want to ruin youre new black hairdo or start the seventh grade with putrid purple streaks in your hair as you did in the sixth grade last year do you








Caught Ya #4
(Correct)
     “You know it will backfire on you, Felicia,” warned Isabelle Ingenuous.  “You don't want to ruin your new black hairdo or start the seventh grade with putrid purple streaks in your hair as you did in the sixth grade last year, do you?”









Vocabulary
(Add each word to your vocabulary section in your binder and define each one.)

putrid













Format for the Caught Ya


Name            Date (Spelled Out)         Caught Ya #


































Caught Ya #5
(Incorrect)
william waggish made a tasteless but funny joke about girls and there wierd habits but no one listened.  they were used to his lame limericks vapid jokes and strange sense of humor 








Caught Ya #5
(Correct)
     William Waggish made a tasteless but funny joke about girls and their weird habits, but no one listened.  They were used to his lame limericks, vapid jokes, and strange sense of humor.










Vocabulary
(Add each word to your vocabulary section in your binder and define each one.)

waggish            
lame                  
vapid        








Caught Ya #6

(Incorrect) 19

the last member of the troop sam sagacious simply stood wisely and silently waiting for the clamor to die down. A erudite young man sam held a book in his hand the count of monte cristo by alexander dumas and he read as he waited


















Caught Ya #6
(Correct) 19

The last member of the troop, Sam Sagacious, simply stood wisely and silently, waiting for the clamor to die down. An erudite young man, Sam held a book in his hand, The Count of Monte Cristo by Alexander Dumas, and he read as he waited.






Vocabulary
(Add each word to your vocabulary section in your binder and define each one.)


Sagacious

Clamor

Erudite


















Caught Ya #7
(Incorrect) 26

since his joke had fallen flat and no one had laughed william waggish regaled his friends with a new limerick about girls whom wear black. brown faced with expressive dark pupils william composed mischievous poems to hide his real aspiration two be as eloquent and articulate a poet as his secret hero langston hughes
    
there once was a strange girl from mack (Colorado)

who’s hair and clothes were all black.
she looked like a crow,
and she should have said no
to trying a magical act














Caught Ya #7
(correct) 26

Since his joke had fallen flat, and no one had laughed, William Waggish regaled his friends with a new limerick about girls who wear black. Brown-faced with expressive dark pupils, William composed mischievous poems to hide his real aspiration: to be as eloquent and articulate a poet as his secret hero, Langston Hughes.
    
There once was a strange girl from Mack    (Colorado)

Whose hair and clothes were all black.
She looked like a crow,
And she should have said “No
To trying a magical act.


Vocabulary
(Add each word to your vocabulary section in your binder and define each one.)


waggish

regaled

aspiration

eloquent

articulate







Caught Ya #8
(Incorrect) 6

sam sagacious put his book in his backpack and he laughed. Felicia fey threatened to zap William with a spell but that didnt deter him









Caught Ya #8
(correct) 6

Sam Sagacious put his book in his backpack and he laughed. Felicia Fey threatened to zap William with a spell, but that didnt deter him.








Vocabulary
(Add each word to your vocabulary section in your binder and define each one.)


sagacious

fey

deter
















Caught Ya #9
(Incorrect) 15

isabelle ingenuous smiled at williams poem and the image of felicia as a crow but she dared not laugh because she didnt want too affront her friend felicia felicia glowered stuck out her tongue at william and than muttered something rude under her breath















Caught Ya #9
(Incorrect) 15

Isabelle Ingenuous smiled at Williams poem and the image of Felicia as a crow, but she dared not laugh because she didnt want too affront her friend Felicia. Felicia glowered, stuck out her tongue at William, and then muttered something rude under her breath.











Vocabulary
(Add each word to your vocabulary section in your binder and define each one.)


affront

glowered 





















Caught Ya #10
(Incorrect) 11

william cant you write anything accept those insipid limericks she snapped. how about giving us a break and trying another form of poetry for a change









Caught Ya #10
(Incorrect) 11

“William, cant you write anything except those insipid limericks?” she snapped. “How about giving us a break and trying another form of poetry for a change?”









Vocabulary
(Add each word to your vocabulary section in your binder and define each one.)


insipid



















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